Dear Reader,
I think my essay has a great voice.The voice that I used in this essay helped my paper come alive. It sounded conversational as if I were talking to some one in person and was in my own words with my own opinion. Another thing I think you should realize while reading my paper is how good I used transitions to go to the next keypoint which we, writers that use the step up to writing tecnique, call it yellow sentence because it helps you slow down to introduce your next idea. Some transitional words that I used were another and lastly.
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