Thursday, October 25, 2007

My Letter about my essay: "Thank You M'am"

Dear Reader,
I think my essay has a great voice.The voice that I used in this essay helped my paper come alive. It sounded conversational as if I were talking to some one in person and was in my own words with my own opinion. Another thing I think you should realize while reading my paper is how good I used transitions to go to the next keypoint which we, writers that use the step up to writing tecnique, call it yellow sentence because it helps you slow down to introduce your next idea. Some transitional words that I used were another and lastly.

My Letter about my essay: What is the most important subject

Dear Reader,
I think my essay has a great voice.The voice that I used in this essay helped my paper come alive. It sounded conversational as if I were talking to some one in person and was in my own words with my own opinion. Another thing I think you should realize while reading my paper is how good I used transitions to go to the next keypoint which we, writers that use the step up to writing tecnique, call it yellow sentence because it helps you slow down to introduce your next idea. Some transitional words that I used were another and lastly.

Tuesday, October 23, 2007

What is the most important subject?

School is an exciting places to learn,although; some of the subjects aren't fun or easy learning. English is my favorite subject, subsequently; I love to write. But school isn't about your favorites. Though I'm not good at arithmetic, I think it is important. I think math is the most important subject because it helps you later in life with managing money and spending also supporting discpline. You may have to chose between a cute skirt you want and paying the rent to keep your warm, fuzzy house. You might have to say to yourself which is more important a house or clothes? So you need to know how to balance your money and what areas to spend more money on then others. You have to discpline yourself and be responsible. Don't spend money you don't have. this means if you really can't buy it with your money don't burrow unless an emergency. Many people overdraw their accounts and use credit cards to pay for something they wanted at the time and didnt have any money. These people are most likely in debt.
Another reason I think that math is important is because it allows you to think, giving your brain daily exercise. Computing is used in our everyday lives without us even knowing it. The more problems you solve, the more knowledge you obtain. Math is a challenge. You may not get one problem the first time, but you shouldnt give up. Try again if your answer isnt right. Perserverance is a trait you gain, when dealing with math.

Friday, October 19, 2007

science Project: I Chip (nano technolgy)

We had to do a group project on the i Chip. my group included Samantha, Alex, and my-self. We all had different jobs. Samantha job was to be the lawyer that would represent our company. Alex job was to market our project by making a poster and a commercial. And my job was to be the Biomedical Egineer who has to design the ichip explaining what it can do and what part of the brain it would go in. I made my ichip into a three deminsional model, almost looking like a box.It is based on color code. Each color code represents what it can do. For example :the color code purple allows the brain to access the internet.

Philosophy of Government#2

In this essay the main question is does the constitution effectively protect and secure the citizens. I do think that the constitution effectively secures its citizens because Congress makes laws that protects our rights,the judicial branch enforces the laws upon us to make sure we dont break them, and the people protesting against unconstitutional laws that violate their rights and the admendments. Another question presented to me was: which is more important personal freedom or secure? I stated that security was more important. I think security is more important than personal freedom because people abuse their powers by harming people around them so instead the government puts limits on their behaviors.

Tuesday, October 9, 2007

Philosophy of Government

My philosophy of government is that government puts limitations on our behaviors leaving only some freedom to us. The government is divided into 3 branches to divide power so that one person won't gain total control of the people. The governmemt controls our use of limited resources.I believe that at sometimes without intensions we can be mean, selfish, and self- interested,but that's just human nature.

Philosophy of Government